Guest poem sent in by Tim Diggins
(Poem #1395) The Man-Moth
Man-Moth: Newspaper misprint for "mammoth". Here, above, cracks in the buildings are filled with battered moonlight. The whole shadow of Man is only as big as his hat. It lies at his feet like a circle for a doll to stand on, and he makes an inverted pin, the point magnetized to the moon. He does not see the moon; he observes only her vast properties, feeling the queer light on his hands, neither warm nor cold, of a temperature impossible to record in thermometers. But when the Man-Moth pays his rare, although occasional, visits to the surface, the moon looks rather different to him. He emerges from an opening under the edge of one of the sidewalks and nervously begins to scale the faces of the buildings. He thinks the moon is a small hole at the top of the sky, proving the sky quite useless for protection. He trembles, but must investigate as high as he can climb. Up the façades, his shadow dragging like a photographer's cloth behind him he climbs fearfully, thinking that this time he will manage to push his small head through that round clean opening and be forced through, as from a tube, in black scrolls on the light. (Man, standing below him, has no such illusions.) But what the Man-Moth fears most he must do, although he fails, of course, and falls back scared but quite unhurt. Then he returns to the pale subways of cement he calls his home. He flits, he flutters, and cannot get aboard the silent trains fast enough to suit him. The doors close swiftly. The Man-Moth always seats himself facing the wrong way and the train starts at once at its full, terrible speed, without a shift in gears or a gradation of any sort. He cannot tell the rate at which he travels backwards. Each night he must be carried through artificial tunnels and dream recurrent dreams. Just as the ties recur beneath his train, these underlie his rushing brain. He does not dare look out the window, for the third rail, the unbroken draught of poison, runs there beside him. He regards it as a disease he has inherited the susceptibility to. He has to keep his hands in his pockets, as others must wear mufflers. If you catch him, hold up a flashlight to his eye. It's all dark pupil, an entire night itself, whose haired horizon tightens as he stares back, and closes up the eye. Then from the lids one tear, his only possession, like the bee's sting, slips. Slyly he palms it, and if you're not paying attention he'll swallow it. However, if you watch, he'll hand it over, cool as from underground springs and pure enough to drink.
Reading that poem by McGough [Poem #1335] made me immediately think of "The Man-Moth" by Elizabeth Bishop, which has a similar "justification" for starting the poem, but quite a different use and tonality. It's hard to comment on The Man-Moth, because I have no idea what it means as a whole poem. Most of Bishop's poetry (with the exception maybe of "One Art") seems to me like that - where it is hard to come up with an understanding of the poem in total but instead one has a mixture of impressions - in this case a sense of human emotional fragility (just the image of a man-as-moth, the tear, but this is also undercut by various narratorial attitudes to him: Dwelling on his failures ("he trembles", "although he fails, of course", "he can't", "he does not dare"...) and the limitations of his lifeworld ("The Man Moth always..." "he must...", "He regards it as...", "he has to..."). In the last stanza, the narratorial voice starts to hint that the man-moth has his own desires and identity ("If you catch him"... "Slyly he ...") But it's the last sentance that makes me unsure of how to understand the poem as a whole. The "However" introduces a turn of the poem to something different - is it to the purity of nature (as opposed to our man-made buildings and cracked sidewalks through which the man-moth emerges)? I'm not sure, but this last turn in the poem coming with its confidence after all the man-moth's uncertainty, seems as refreshing as the man-moth's tear. Tim Diggins Biography: [broken link] http://www.poets.org/poets/poets.cfm?45442B7C000C01